Very good!

This was an excellent piece of work, alot of effort had been put into it, I really enjoyed watching it, it was extremely captivating with a brilliant brilliant plot! YAY/WOO for you! I personally didnt like the LOTR music, because it simple reminded me of LOTR, but it seemed to fit very well, excellent use of heavy guitar music! I recommend anyone watch this!

Good

I quite liked this, it was original, interesting, and thoughtful. Alot of effort must of been put into it! I wasnt to sure on the subject of birds tho...probs a personal preference but i couldnt take it seriously alot of the time, (im sure others will think differently though)the classical music gave it a slightly cheesey edge. Congratulations on the effort, I look forward to your next movie!

Yay!

This is actually quite an original idea, there is no rule written down on newgrounds.com which says that your flash work is not allowed to be informative. Unfortunately there arent enough genre sections to allow for movies like this so you are going to be poorly marked by the wrong unappriciative audience.

Please dont consider this a stupid flash movie, this probably deserves a higher score than most of the generic shit pumped into newgrounds.com daily. Instead of comparing it to other flash movies i judged it on how useful i found it and wether i had though anyone else would find it useful, also in this case its originality. Unfortunately there wasnt enough content for a really high mark but next time why dont you go for a documentry style animation? Include some humour add a few more techniques to learn, have a step by step tutorial section, maybe even a menu system for different lessons.

DO NOT RUBBISH THIS WORK. It is good, but needs improving on and the right type of open minded voter. Goodluck on your next one! THERE WILL BE A NEXT ONE!!! :)

Try harder

Programming wise it seems to be quite good, but don't be disheartened by what people are saying just keep on trying at it, and perhaps work on the graphical side a bit more, im sure with a really thick story line and some better graphics you'll be well on the road.